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Could you help me find mistakes in my sentence?

Hi Guy, help me find errors in the next sentence PLS, cousin I'm not good in Eng, Thank U! Assuming that I am floating on an island, I will make three types of tools, the weapon is The1st fishing beacuase can use to solve the problem of hunger, if luck maybe I can catch some losters for dinner, also whether there has been some wild animals of the island, I use the gun to kill to protect the second instrument is a lighter, I'll take you to the island and use to make a fire to cook food and keep the body warm, usually teampteture is very different island from morning to night, so I to make a fire to keep my body warm. Third pocket knife, it is very important to me, becaue I use very often like to use tools or utensils I received your message and details thanks very useful! ^ ^

Here is the correction. The use of time is the main issue here. I put all that I switch between [] and my comments in (). If you have further questions, please feel free to e-mail me. Assuming that [I was floating] in [the island] (this case, I think you mean "if I was surfing one (desert / Distance) Island. This would be preferable) I [would] make three of kind [s] tools [.] [The first was a weapon] fishing [because] I [can] be used to resolve [hunger] question [s] (in this case, I would say: "I would use it to solve the food problem "). [With luck, may] take a little [b] sters for dinner [. d] even if [were] wildlife [on] the island [may] use the gun to [protect myself]. The second tool [is] lighter [.] I [take me] and use it for firewood [a] Cook [no hyphen] food and maintain [nothing here] hot [. N] ormaly [is cold at night in tropical islands, so I need a fire to keep warm.] Third [was] a knife, [which] is very important [to] me [no space] becaue I [would] often use [for example], some tools or implements [.] EDIT: I am sorry to say not agree with Gregg K's response, because as I said, the main problem is time, and basically was rewritten in the state. You may not use the present tense or in the future, as he initiated the section "assume". This is an assumption, which means it does not really happen, So I suggest that the proposed use.

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